Thanks, but I think I have to let that chunk stew for a little longer. It's been puked out into the word-processor (in the Rough Draft) I posted, so it at least exists.
I avoid small talk whenever possible, but in this case, I have to. The dialogue in the scene where James and Andrew are introduced to Caroline has all the spontaneity of a Kabuki drama, but I need to include it because it's full of first impressions. The INNER dialogue is easy, but the external HURTS.
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Date: 2007-09-04 03:22 am (UTC)Thanks, but I think I have to let that chunk stew for a little longer. It's been puked out into the word-processor (in the Rough Draft) I posted, so it at least exists.
I avoid small talk whenever possible, but in this case, I have to. The dialogue in the scene where James and Andrew are introduced to Caroline has all the spontaneity of a Kabuki drama, but I need to include it because it's full of first impressions. The INNER dialogue is easy, but the external HURTS.