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Author's Notes:  For [livejournal.com profile] mamazano's prompt on [livejournal.com profile] raise_the_dead, for the "One More Day" challenge. The prompt was "reef."




Excerpted:  "New Discoveries in the Mediterranean Sea"  By Sanjeev Doulton.   BBC World News.  BBC, London.  13 Aug. 2009.

The Mediterranean, off the coast of Africa – centuries of nautical history are cloaked by these gloriously blue waters.  But now, a team of divers, funded by Italian millionaire Jack Spizella, has persuaded the Roman Lake to yield up a few more of her secrets.  In the deep plains of the Ionian Basin, the team has discovered one of the best-preserved 18th century shipwrecks ever found.

“We couldn’t be more pleased.” says Dr. Shupman, of the Woods Hole Oceanographic Institute.  “She’s in astoundingly good condition.”

‘She’ is the HMS Dauntless, a Royal Navy pirate-hunter who sank in these waters in 1750.  She was originally thought to have foundered during a hurricane, but Dr. Shupman hopes that their exploration of the wreck will shed some new light on her harrowing final hours.

“There’s a lot more damage to her hull under the waterline than we would have expected…” says Dr. Shupman, indicating that the ship possibly struck a reef while in the throes of the storm.  That she managed to stay afloat for some time after being hit is a testament to the skill of her captain and crew.  “That’s the only way to explain how she got all the way out here before finally sinking.”

Using robotic cameras, complicated sonar arrays and all the technology that the 21st century has to offer, the team continues to search through the wreckage, hoping to unravel the mysteries of this relic from the Age of Sail. 

For BBC News, I’m Sanjeev Doulton, Tripoli

 

Excerpted:  Discovery Channel.  Advertisement.  The Discovery Channel. 5 March 2010.

NARRATIVE VOICE-OVER.  CAMERA PANS OVER  FOOTAGE OF THE WRECK.

BILL KURTIS:
Next time, on “Lost at Sea:” the HMS Dauntless.  Over two hundred and fifty years ago, her captain and crew drove her on into a hurricane, chasing a pirate – a dreadful mistake that would cost them their ship, and, for most of them, their lives.

STUDIO, DAY. 
SUBTITLE:  Dr.  Joan Hartwick, Author: Heart of Oak: A Biography of Sir James Norrington

HARTWICK:

Well, I think one of the things that has to be remembered about this is that this is the wreck that very nearly cost Sir James his career…

NARRATIVE VOICE-OVER.  CUT TO FOOTAGE OF THE VICTORY. 

BILL KURTIS:

Was the captain’s incompetence at fault?

STUDIO, DAY
SUBTITLE:  Ambrose Beckett, Author:  Modernity Denied: The East India Company in the West Indies

BECKETT:

I think we can safely say that James Norrington was one of the most overrated Commodores in the history of the Jamaica Squadron.


NARRATIVE VOICE-OVER.  CUT TO HURRICANE STOCK FOOTAGE.

BILL KURTIS:

Or is a freak storm to be blamed?

STUDIO, DAY
SUBTITLE:  Dr.  Jason Maturin, Climatologist

MATURIN:

In 1750, the Little Ice Age was at its peak.  The weather was notoriously unpredictable, and, with such upheaval, violent extremes are almost a guarantee…


NARRATIVE VOICE-OVER.  CUT TO WRECKAGE FOOTAGE:

BILL KURTIS:

Join us next time as we explore this ship and the mystery behind her on “Lost At Sea!”


Date: 2008-05-08 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rum-inspector.livejournal.com
Oh mine you're good :-o
*waiting for the HBO version... or wal-mart...*

Date: 2008-05-08 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you!

Oh yes, definitely! Or how about the HD IMAX? :)

Date: 2008-05-08 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captsparrow4evr.livejournal.com
This is fantastic! It never occurred to me to do something like this. BRAVA!! What a great imagination! And I love BBC and the Discovery Channel.:)

Date: 2008-05-08 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you!

Well, it went sort of like this... I was thinking that a "glories of nature" thing might be good, and diving bells ARE accurate for the 18th century, but I didn't want to be TOO derivative of Patrick O'Brian, and flashed on divers exploring a modern wreck, and, well...

Date: 2008-05-08 07:36 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-05-08 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! :)

Date: 2008-05-08 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ophelivia.livejournal.com
LOL, very different

Date: 2008-05-08 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

That it is! :) Thank you!

Date: 2008-05-08 08:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mamazano.livejournal.com
Not annoyed at all! This was fabulous, I would watch that documentary.

Tell me, is that a great great great something of Lord Cutler Beckett? Has the same sneer...

Sir James, well he doesn't sound like he did so bad for himself after all.

Date: 2008-05-08 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Oh, I'm so glad! It's kind of off-the-wall... thank you!

Yea, I think so! Some grand-nephew or something out to resurrect old Cutler's reputation... :)

Nope! He'll come out all right in the end. :

Date: 2008-05-08 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
"Heart of Oak" - Loved that! This was wonderment in all it's shining colors. Brava for the imagination!

Date: 2008-05-08 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! I had a good time browsing Amazon for title ideas.. :)

Date: 2008-05-08 08:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alex-beecroft.livejournal.com
Squee! Oh yes, that's brilliant! I'll certainly be tuning in next week :)

Date: 2008-05-08 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com


Thank you! :)

See, as I told rum_inspector, I think it needs to be an IMAX. :)

Date: 2008-05-08 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
'Italian millionaire Jack Spizella', eh? I guess Jack's had time to accumulate a lot of swag over the centuries (and adopt a convincing new Mediterranean nationality!)

This fic is both wonderfully entertaining and delightfully different. :)

Date: 2008-05-09 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thanks! :)

I THOUGHT you'd like that bit... :)

Date: 2008-05-09 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
You certainly thought right.

I have a number of ideas about what eternally-youthful Jack may have got up to since his piracy days. (Yes- it is possible those ideas will someday solidify enough for me to start writing 'em down.)

Date: 2008-05-08 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haldir-fancier.livejournal.com
JASON MATURIN.

I love you.

Date: 2008-05-09 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Why, thank you!

Yes, Stephen is my Hero! :)

Date: 2008-05-08 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com
What a great and original idea! It was lots of fun, and I'll be awaiting the next episode :-)

Date: 2008-05-09 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! :)

Yes, I have in my mind's eye, a little academic skirmish...

Date: 2008-05-08 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] compassrose7577.livejournal.com
Coming from a family (husband and son, at any rate) where shipwrecks are a virtual religion, this is too good! And so timely with the discovery of the ship just off the coast of Africa that was loaded with 'treasure'.

Clever, clever girl! I know that's redundant, in light of all the other comments, but I just felt compelled to offer my two cents worth.

Odd, over 200 years later, and we still know even less about what happened. With every answer there comes a question. Hmm....

Date: 2008-05-09 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you!

Yes, I may have turned on a few of those shows, you know, occasionally. And by "turned on a few shows occasionally," I mean, I have a TiVo filled with them.. :)

That really is something I enjoy playing with.. because how many times are perceptions just dead wrong, after enough time passes? Who fired first at Lexington, for example? They're STILL arguing that one...

Date: 2008-05-08 10:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com
AHAHAHHAH beautiful!!

Date: 2008-05-09 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! :)

Date: 2008-05-09 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gryphons-lair.livejournal.com
*standing ovation*

Oh, lovely! [livejournal.com profile] mamazano may not like it, but I adore it!

Brava!

Date: 2008-05-09 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! *Bows*

(Mamazano does, btw. I felt much relieved. :) )

Date: 2008-05-09 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meowbooks.livejournal.com
Clever. I like the little stab at Beckett's descendent. Though, when I saw the "Jack Spizella" I did wonder whether our Jack had found his path to immortality. :D

Date: 2008-05-09 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thanks! :)

I'm not saying either way, but if you google our Italian millionaire's last name... ;)

Date: 2008-05-10 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] equilibrium44.livejournal.com
Clever as all get out! (smiles)

Wait! Beckett had descendents? So..Jack didn't.. well.. you know?!

Date: 2008-05-10 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! :)

He may be a great-great-great-nephew or something. :)

Date: 2008-05-10 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearly-dreams.livejournal.com
OMG.


*DIES*

As in, rigor mortis setting in here. That was just... too funny!! XDDDDDD

Date: 2008-05-10 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Date: 2008-05-11 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilfluffykitten.livejournal.com
Oh marvellous!

What a clever use of the prompt, and its good to see that it all seemed to work out well for everyone (or at least their descendants) in the end.

Date: 2008-05-12 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! :)

It does, mostly. Though things always look a lot smoother from 250 years in the future! :)

Date: 2008-05-11 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danglingdingle.livejournal.com
I tend to cry when watching Discovery Channel. The magnificance of nature over man moves something deep in me. You actually captured that, even if I'm not sure you meant to do that.
a testament to the skill of her captain and crew.
made me shiver out of respect of the crew.

I've never got around to bluntly telling you that you're a fantastic writer, but I'll take the opportunity and state it here: I think you're a fantastic writer. Never stop, please.

Date: 2008-05-12 07:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

*blush*

Thank you.. you're very kind. :) I'm just getting back into writing, after a long hiatus. That's awfully nice of you. :)

I adore documentaries, and watch the Discovery channel probably a lot more than I should. You've seen the Boom-de-ya-da commercial? You can now get the mp3 at Discovery's website...

Date: 2008-07-20 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] commodore-lydia.livejournal.com
Oooh - it's both humorous (Jack Spizella and Ambrose Beckett, for example) and somehow chilling - I could see the Dauntless, much better preserved than she had any right to be, just appearing out of the abyss when the light of the submersibles hit her, an apparition from the days of yore. There's a certain terrible beauty to shipwrecks - nature always wins, it seems, but that doesn't stop us from trying to win. The line That she managed to stay afloat for some time after being hit is a testament to the skill of her captain and crew. was moving in its own way.

Definitely tuning in when this airs - fantastic work!

Date: 2008-07-21 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] concertigrossi.livejournal.com

Thank you! :)

Aren't those videos awesome? I was absolutely enthralled by the JASON footage of the Titanic...

Glad you enjoyed it!
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